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Tuesday, October 22, 2019

The Shoreless Sea by J. Scott Coatsworth - Blog Tour with Review, Exclusive Excerpt and Giveaway


The Shoreless Sea - J. Scott Coatsworth


J. Scott Coatsworth has a new queer sci fi book out, the final book in his Liminal Sky trilogy: "The Shoreless Sea." And books one and two are on sale!


As the epic trilogy hurtles toward its conclusion, the fight for the future isn’t over yet. It could lead to a new beginning, or it might spell the end for the last vestiges of humankind.


The generation ship Forever has left Earth behind, but a piece of the old civilization lives on in the Inthworld—a virtual realm that retains memories of Earth's technological wonders and vices. A being named Lilith leads the uprising, and if she succeeds in setting its inhabitants free, they could destroy Forever.


But during the generation ship's decades-long voyage, humanity has evolved. Liminals with the ability to connect with the world mind and the Inthworld provide a glimmer of hope. They'll have to face not only Lilith’s minions, but also the mistrust of their own kind and persecution from a new government as homotypicals continue to fear what they can't understand.


The invasion must be stopped, the Inthworld must be healed, and the people of Forever must let go of their past and embrace what they’re meant to become.


Series Blurb:


Humankind is on its way to the stars, a journey that will change it forever. Each of the stories in Liminal Sky explores that future through the lens of a generation ship, where the line between science fiction and fantasy often blurs. At times both pessimistic and very hopeful, Liminal Sky thrusts you into a future few would ever have imagined.



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The eBook for book one in the Liminal Sky trilogy, "The Stark Divide," is just 99¢, and book two, "The Rising Tide," is $1.99 at all vendors:



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Giveaway


Scott is giving away a $25 Amazon gift card with this tour, along with three eBook sets of his Oberon Cycle trilogy. For a chance to win, enter via Rafflecopter:




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Excerpt



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Kiryn Hammond-Clarke floated in the darkness of space, stars he’d never seen in person twinkling against the velvety black depths.

The voice came to him from out of nowhere. “Can anyone hear me?”

In his dreams, he could hear. Like when Belynn let him ride in her mind.

The voice repeated, sounding stretched and thin. “Is anyone out there?”

In the distance, a single star glowed brighter than all the others, though it was still just a small golden dot.

Kiryn reached out toward the light, his hand naked to the cold of the void.

Ice crystals formed on his arm, hardening it in place. The cold reached into his bones like knives of frozen glass. It raced up his bicep, the burning cold fire of the void.

He snatched back his arm, but he was too late. The freezing grip reached his heart, and he screamed silently—

Kiryn awoke with a start, sitting up in bed in his dorm room drenched with sweat. He ran his hands through his dark hair, letting them come to rest clasped behind his head.

First Light flashed past in the trees outside his window, brightening up the room.

The world was utterly silent.

The silence, his constant companion since birth, was particularly soothing after his rude awakening. It wrapped itself around him like a blanket, a suit of armor, a barrier between him and the hustle and bustle of the outside world.

Between him and emotion.

He held his arm out for inspection, half expecting it to be blackened by the void. Instead, it looked perfectly normal. Warm and tan, halfway between his mothers’ sepia and white skin tones.

He shivered at the memory.

The bed moved under him, and his date from the night before sat up, his mouth moving soundlessly.

The man was handsome, a Thyrean sent to the university at Micavery for his higher schooling—long limbs, blond hair shaved short, warm brown eyes.

His name was Dax. Or Zack. Or something.

Kiryn’s lipreading was decent, but he hadn’t bothered to spend too much time learning this one’s name. Dax or Zack hadn’t seemed to mind much.

Kiryn pointed at his ear and shook his head.

The man’s mouth closed, and he blushed. “Sorry. I forgot.”

That one was easy enough to read.

He grabbed the piece of cotton paper and a pencil Kiryn kept at his bedside just for that purpose and scribbled something out longhand, then handed it over to him.

It’s Dax. And are you okay?

Kiryn stared at him. Did you just read my mind? Maybe there was a little Liminal in him. He laughed, wondering not for the first time what it sounded like from the outside. It felt clunky and awkward on the inside.

He sighed and took the paper and pencil.

Dax’s hand lingered over his for an extra second before letting go.

Bad dream. Class in fifteen minutes. He hesitated, then scribbled, Dinner?

Dax took the paper, and a grin lit up his face. His eager nod needed no translation. I work at the hatchery until six. Meet me there?

Kiryn nodded and grinned.

Dax slipped out of bed and pulled on his trousers and white shirt, the V-neck showing off his chest to perfection.

Kiryn sat back with his hands behind his head, admiring the view.

He leaned over, kissed Kiryn on the cheek, and mouthed, “See you.”

When Dax left, Kiryn grabbed a change of clothes and headed down the hall to the dorm bathroom. He hopped into the shower, using the aromatic red berry soap bar his mom and mamma had sent him from the Estate. The smell transported him, and he closed his eyes and imagined himself standing among the long, even rows of red berry vines that arched across the hillsides.

His parents worried about him, out here alone, but it was Andy who had insisted he go.

When Kiryn had been born congenitally and profoundly deaf, Andy and Shandra had learned sign language from the world mind in vee.

There were so few other deaf people in Forever. So few like him.

The day before he was set to leave for university, to catch the public wagon headed for Darlith and then Micavery, he’d had a huge panic attack.

His parents had sat him down along with his sister, Belynn:



“I’m scared. Why do I have to go away?” He was fidgeting, nervous.

“You have to go. There’s nothing here for you.” Andy indicated the Estate, where the family had built a thriving agricultural business on the backs of Trip’s and Colin’s earlier work.

You’re here.” His hands signed it while his knee bounced up and down.

Andy shook her head. “This is our place. You need to go.”

He flushed. “I’m sorry. I didn’t realize I was such a burden.”

“No.That was emphatic. “That’s not what I meant. We don’t want you to get trapped here, working on the Estate for the rest of your life. There’s a whole world out there for you to explore.” She looked up at Shandra, who nodded.

“I’ll go with him,” Belynn said and signed it at the same time, but he could hear her inside his head too.

Mom could do that, too, of course, but she had to touch him to do it.

“You’re not ready.” Shandra glared at Belynn and shook her head.

“I’ve been with Kiryn in every vee class since I was born. I’m only two years younger than he is. Let me go with him to help.”

Kiryn frowned. He wasn’t sure he wanted his little sister tagging along after him, cramping his style. If he decided to go.

Belynn’s hand found his, palm to palm, and he could feel her emotions. We can take care of each other. That thought was private, just for him, inside his head.

Maybe so.

Andy looked at Shandra. “They could take care of each other.” She echoed Belynn’s thought and touched Shandra’s hand. Something passed between them.

Shandra looked at him and then at Belynn, uncertainty clear on her face. “We could… try it.”

Belynn squeezed his hand. “Yes!”

“For a semester.” Andy kissed Shandra on the forehead.

Kiryn thought about it. It would be nice to have someone close by, just in case. Someone who really knew him. “Okay.” And it would be a lot less scary.

Now he was here, and Belynn wouldn’t be far behind.

Where are you, big brother? Belynn’s insistent voice.

I’ll be back in a minute. He pulled the towel from its wooden peg, dried off his hair and shoulders.

A couple of the other guys in the dorm, Stave and Trevor, waved on their way to their own showers. Cute as hell, but straighter than the old antenna on Micavery’s village green. Well, except when Stave got drunk on red berry wine….

Kiryn grinned. He pulled on his trousers and shirt and padded back to his room. Belynn was waiting for him on his bed. “How did you get in?” he signed.

They touched palms, the emotions flowing between them and synching.

“Easy. Aric at the front desk is a sucker for a pretty girl.”

“Like I said, how did you get in?”

She stuck out her tongue at him. “Come on. We’re going to be late.” She tugged him off the bed, and Kiryn barely had time to grab his carry sack before she had him out the door and down the hall.


4.5 out of 5 Stars
The Shoreless Sea is the penultimate book in the Liminal Sky series. This book packs in a lot of information in it's pages, so be prepared for a lot of storytelling. 

It's no secret that I'm sci-fi/fantasy book addict and am always looking for the next good read to devour. This series has more then filled that need for a well written book, with highly developed world building, and characters that are constantly developing. While this series does feature multiple couples, this is not a romance. These stories are straight up dystopian science-fiction, with a healthy dash of fantasy woven within. 

The Shoreless Sea features 3 separate timelines events that feature the same characters at different points in their lives, their relationships, and their abilities. This is not a book to devour in one sitting. Which is actually what I did, but I feel like it needs more than that because of the depth to the story. Really there is a LOT of storyline packed into each of the timelines, and it needs to be savored vs devoured in this case. 

The characters in this book are extremely well developed, and have complex POVs, that carry into the story as they weave their parts into the full story. Again t his is not a book to skim, this is one you have to pay attention to every word on the page. Yes I do keep repeating that because honestly, if you blink, or skim the page, you're going to miss something that might impact a later part of the story. 

I don't want to share the elements of the story because that may ruin your enjoyment. I do want to encourage everyone to pick up this book if you've read the rest of the series, or the whole series if you've never read it. It's so worth it!! 

I look forward to many more stories from this author. I thoroughly enjoy his 'voice' in storytelling, and his world building is on par with that of the old sci-fi masters. So if you have some free time, pick up this book or this series and enjoy!!





Excerpt – The Shoreless Sea
From Part Two, Chapter One

Belynn stacked the mugs on her platter, looking around the empty tavern in despair.
There’d been a raucous party, a birthday for one of the town luminaries, such as they were. The place was a mess. Tables knocked over, stacks of dirty plates, and a pile of something in one corner on the floor that she didn’t care to examine too closely.
Wenda had sent her son, Dany, to say she was sick and couldn’t come in, so Belynn had had all the fun to herself. She and Wenda had enjoyed a brief fling when Belynn had arrived in Thyre, but it had burned out quickly. Now they were fast friends.
She sipped the last bit of beer from the bottom of one of the mugs, feeling the pleasant numbness return like an old friend. She lived now from drink to drink, waking up gasping in the middle of the night and searching for her flask. Her job as the barkeep here at the Shattered Moon kept her busy and gave her an excuse to drink on the job. Not a lot. Just a little at a time. One long, steady drunken jag to keep her demons at bay.
To keep Lilith away.
The bell on the front door rang as she carried the first load of mugs and plates into the back to deposit them into the washbasin.
“We’re closing, sorry!” It was past midnight, and she was going to have enough of a chore getting the place back into shape without more customers.
“Just one drink?”
Belynn turned to find Gordy popping his head into the kitchen. “Hey there!” She set the tray on the wooden counter, wiped her hands on her apron, and ran to embrace him. “What are you doing here?”
His hair was longer, pulled back into a tail, and his face had a few lines that hadn’t been there the last time she’d seen him. But he was still Gordy.
He grinned. “I heard the best-looking waitress in Thyre worked here.”
“Yeah, well, she’s sick today. You’re stuck with me.” She looked up at him. He was different, but still Gordy—still the same raffish hair, and those brown eyes…. “It’s good to see you.”
“You too.” He glanced over his shoulder. “You have a mess out there. Mind if I help?”
“That would be great. We had a big party in here—”
“Of cattle?”
“Yeah, something like that.” She handed him a platter. “Here, start gathering dishes. I’ll get to work cleaning them.” She opened the valve to fill the sink and started putting food scraps in the bin for a trip to the dissolution pit. If Wenda had been here, she would have taken them home for her cats.
“What are you doing in Thyre?” She was happy to see him, but the last time they’d been in the same room was when they’d broken up, after a whirlwind relationship that had lasted almost six months. “Weren’t you settled in Micavery?”
She hadn’t been in much of a place for a relationship back then, tainted as she was by what Lilith and the acolytes had done to her. Truth be told, she wasn’t in much better shape now, five years later. She’d just learned to live with it and had taken up her old self-medication habit to cope with the stain.
Gordy returned with a stack of dishes and unloaded them on the mallowood counter. “I did. I got a job there—at the Knife’s Edge.” He showed off the scabbard hanging from his waist. “They have me making knives. Turns out I’m quite good at it.”
She nodded. “You’d be good at just about anything you put your mind to, I think.” Belynn rolled up her sleeves and grabbed a cloth and some reed soap. She sudsed up the cloth and started cleaning the dishes, stacking them for rinsing and drying. “I appreciate the help. Wenda was sick tonight….” Her hand was shaking. It was one of the signs.
She set down the cloth and picked up a half-full mug of beer and downed it.
“Still doing that, I see.” Gordy set down the tray, unloading the dishes and carefully avoiding her gaze.
“Yeah. Still doing it.” She went back to washing, her face hot. “It… it helps. With the stain.”
He was quiet for a moment. The only sounds were the clank of plates and the splash of the cloth in the water. “I’m sorry.”
“For what? You didn’t do anything.” On the contrary. He’d done everything he could to help her. She just hadn’t been ready to accept it.
“Are you happy?”
She stopped, her hands holding tightly onto the ceramic plate. She squeezed her eyes shut. How dare you ask me that? How the hell could I be happy after that? She took a deep breath and forced herself to open her eyes. She finished cleaning the plate and set it down with the others before answering. “I get by.”
He put an arm on her shoulder. “Oh, Belynn. I’m so sorry—”
She pulled away from him like his touch burned. “Are there more dishes?”
His hand withdrew, and she heard him leave the kitchen.
I scared him off. She sighed again and went back to cleaning the plates and mugs. Just as well. She had her life down to a workable schedule now. She didn’t need any additional variables or unexpected interruptions.
The door swung open and Gordy deposited more dishes. He didn’t say another word.
He stayed. She took comfort from that fact.
They worked in silence, and after about an hour all the dishes were cleaned and rinsed and put away, and the common room—even the disgusting corner where someone had lost their dinner—had been put back into order.
She served herself a beer from the barrel—one of the perks of being the manager—and offered him one too.
“No thanks.” His first words since she’d all but bitten his head off. “I’ll take some water, though.”
They sat down together. She was tired but satisfied with her work. There was something cathartic about putting things in order, about organizing things on the outside even if she was a mess on the inside.
“So why are you here?” she asked at last. Few came to Thyre by chance. It was the edge of the world, more or less, a rough-and-tumble town obsessed with building a wall around Forever. Someday it might be a great city. For now, it was the place you went when you didn’t fit in anywhere else.
Still, she liked its spirit. When that spirit didn’t throw up on her clean floor.
He sat back, staring at her, and took a sip of his water. “You’re still hurting.”
She nodded. “Some days are worse than others.”
“The voices?”
She shook her head. “The alcohol keeps them away. It’s the stain. The memory of the stench in my brain that won’t go away.” She shuddered and took another sip of alcohol. The key was control. Just a little. A sip here and there to keep herself in the safe zone.
“You’re not okay.” Gordy’s words were accusing, or they should have been. But instead they were full of compassion, even their own pain. “I’m so sorry.”
“Sorry for what?”
“I should have checked in on you. I should have… I should have stayed.”
She shook her head. “Not your fault. I was broken. I’m holding it together now.” Mostly.
He took her mug away, set it down on the mallowood table, and wrapped his arms around her tightly.
She closed her eyes. It felt good to be held by someone who cared for her. It had been a long time, and Gordy was a good guy. Why are you here? He hadn’t come all this way just to ask her how she felt.
She pushed him away gently. “You still haven’t told me why you came.”
He sat back, his hand on his chin, as if considering the best way to say something. “Kiryn asked me to come.”
“Ah.” So this was all just another plan of her brother’s to “make her better.”
She got up to finish closing up and shoo him out the door, but he reached for her and touched her arm, pulled her back gently. “Please. Let me finish.”
Belynn sat back down reluctantly. Five minutes. Then she was going home. Alone.
“We’re going into the inthworld.”
That got her attention. “What? How… where is it?”
“The world mind found it. She wants us to save it and to neutralize the threat.” He took her hand. “Belynn, we need you, and I think you need this too.”
Belynn’s carefully ordered defenses came crashing down. Lilith. Oh, spin-fucking Lilith.
She’d spent the last five years running from what had happened to her, the taint that creature had left in her head. She’d even tried a support group for Davian’s possession victims, but it wasn’t the same. They had been unaware of their captivity, virtually zombies.
She had been very aware of hers, a captive in her own mind while Lilith gleefully raped her consciousness. Even the intifada’s other victims hadn’t suffered through the same level of invasion and corruption that she had.
Her hands were shaking again. “I’m… scared. I don’t know if I can face her again.”
“I know.”
“No, you don’t! Every day, every waking hour, I think about it. About her. What if she finds me again? What if she… takes me again?” She grabbed the mug and took a deep draught, the liquid burning down her throat, and then slammed it down. “That’s why I drink. The voices, they were annoying… torture even, sometimes. But I could learn to live with them. But Lilith….” She whispered the name, as if saying it out loud might conjure the beast. “I can’t let her find me. Not again.”
“Then let’s find her first.”
She stared at him like he was crazy. I’ve been running for so long. “I don’t think I can.”
“You have to do something—”
“Don’t tell me what I have to do.” She laid her hands flat on the table, willing them to be still. “Come on.” She set the two mugs on the bar. She would put them away tomorrow. Or someone would.
She pulled him outside and locked the door.



Author Bio



J. Scott Coatsworth

Scott lives between the here and now and the what could be. Indoctrinated into fantasy and sci fi by his mother at the tender age of nine, he devoured her library. But as he grew up, he wondered where the people like him were.


He decided it was time to create the kinds of stories he couldn’t find at Waldenbooks. If there weren’t gay characters in his favorite genres, he would remake them to his own ends.


His friends say Scott’s brain works a little differently – he sees relationships between things that others miss, and gets more done in a day than most folks manage in a week. He seeks to transform traditional sci fi, fantasy, and contemporary worlds into something unexpected.


A Rainbow Award winning author and Science Fiction Writer’s Association (SFWA) member, he runs Queer Sci Fi and QueeRomance Ink with his husband Mark, sites that bring queer people together to promote and celebrate fiction reflecitng their own reality.


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Wednesday, May 15, 2019

At The Trough by Adam Knight - Release Blitz with Excerpt and Giveaway


Title: At the Trough
Author: Adam Knight
Publisher: NineStar Press
Release Date: May 13, 2019
Heat Level: 1 - No Sex
Pairing: Female/Female
Length: 107200
Genre: Science Fiction, LGBT, lesbian sci-fi, futuristic, dystopia, education, conformity, teacher, student, secret meetings, forbidden book, mental illness

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Synopsis

In a future where schools have no teachers and no classrooms, Jennifer Calderon is the perfect student. Every day she watches her video modules, plays her edu games, and never misses an answer. Life is comfortable in the Plex, a mile-wide apartment building. Corporations and brand names surround her and satisfy her every want and need.

Then one day, her foul-mouthed, free-spirited, 90’s-kitsch-wearing girlfriend Melody disrupts everything. She introduces her to a cynical, burned-out former teacher, who teaches them the things no longer taught in school. Poetry. Critical thinking. Human connection.

But these lessons draw the attention of EduForce, the massive corporation with a stranglehold on education. When they show how far they are willing to go keep their customers obedient, Jennifer has to decide what is most important to her and how much she is willing to sacrifice for it.

Excerpt

At the Trough
Adam Knight © 2019
All Rights Reserved

One: Learning if Fun
“The brain releases the neurotransmitter dopamine in response to certain stimuli. Eating candy, having sex, consuming drugs, even petting a dog can trigger a pleasure response. Video games, especially ones with bright lights, upbeat music, and facile accomplishments are especially potent, flooding the brain with a sense of reward. As such, they were the bane of teachers for many years. That is, until EduForce began to use these games in their products. The scourge of learning was being disguised as learning itself.”

—Charles Winston, The Trough, p. 114

Jennifer Calderón stared into the screen, slack-jawed and passive as the bright colors and shapes burst before her eyes. Her pupils traced letters and blocks as they bounced from one end of the sixty-inch screen to the next. She reached out and touched a word before it hit the bottom–GAMBOLED. The white letters lit up, neon-green, and the word whooshed across the screen to smash into another word—GAMBLED—and shatter into a shower of sparkles.

“Same-sounder found!” a chirpy electronic voice declared.

Dopamine squirted into Jennifer’s brain in happy little jets. A smile traced the corners of her lips. Learning was fun.

Jennifer flicked her eyes to the upper right-hand corner of the screen. The figure 23/25 quickened her pulse. Two more. Two more word pairs and she would earn the Same-Sounder Achievement.

A new word appeared at the bottom of her screen. ASCENT, it read. The friendly female voice read the word and definition. Bubbles with other vocabulary terms floated around the screen. Colors whirled before her eyes and electronic dance beats filled her ears as she searched for Same-Sounders. Then she saw it. The word, in white letters on a floating bubble, drifted toward the bottom. Jennifer’s finger jabbed at the screen. Pop! The word ASSENT exploded in fireworks. More music and chirpy voices.

“Same-sounder found,” the voice said. More dopamine gushed into Jennifer’s brain. Her eyes flicked up to the corner. 24/25.

CYMBAL.

Once more, Jennifer scanned the bubbles and blobs and cubes and tetrahedrons swirling in her vision. Her breath was shallow. More and more words poured onto the screen. In one moment after another, tiny subdivided fractions of seconds, Jennifer saw and rejected words she did not think made the same sound as “cymbal.” Her eyes, her brain, and her hands all had to work in unison. Each level of Same-Sounder Finder was faster, more complex, and more stimulating than the last.

Then she saw it. SYMBOL.

She thrust her finger out to the screen. The little magenta gem in which the word sat was zigzagging down the screen, and she almost missed it and pressed the word TUMBLE crossing its path. But the SYMBOL illuminated, exploded, and a fireworks finale showed on the screen. 25/25.

“Same-sounder found,” the voice declared, then louder and triumphantly, “Same-sounder achievement unlocked!”

Jennifer leaped and thrust her fists in the air as a fanfare of electronic tones rang through her bedroom. Not many students earned perfect scores on Same-Sounder Finder, but Jennifer did. She earned perfect scores on everything. She was twenty-three years old and finishing her last year of schooling, a year ahead of the usual schedule. Because of all the hours she put into learning, and because she never had to redo any of her modules, she had raced ahead of her peers, many of whom were still on Achievement Level 13 or 14. She was working on 15.

After the music died down, the screen went still. Jennifer’s head was still pounding. A headache was setting in, as was a twinge of crankiness. She left her bedroom and went to the kitchen where she poured herself a cup of coffee. Her mother always had a pot brewing, anything to keep her beloved daughter focused on school. Jennifer clogged the coffee with sugar and milk, stirred it, and took a gulp. Better. She freed a couple of aspirins from their foil pouches and swallowed them with the next mouthful of coffee. She returned to her room.

Jennifer slid her finger along the screen and opened it to a new frame, one summarizing her academic progress. Current Achievement Level: 14. 12 percent of the way to 15. 106 of 880 modules completed. Achievement Level Grade Point Average: 5.0/5.0.

Total Progress to Completion of all Achievement Levels: 97 percent. 12,845 of 13,215 modules completed.

And then there was the final number. The prized number, the number she had worked for since age three.

Aggregate Grade Point Average: 5.0/5.0

Every assignment Jennifer had ever done, from toddlerhood into now her mid-twenties, had been flawless. Missing just one question on one task would eradicate her record—The Perfect Five. There had been students with 5.0 GPAs before, but their scores came with asterisks. Usually the student had missed a smattering of questions throughout their education, resulting in a score that would round up to 5.0 in the ten-thousandths place. But Jennifer Calderón began each module on a knife’s edge, knowing one slip up would end her lunge at history. Each completed question nudged her progress toward earning Achievement Level 15, the equivalent of what was once her high school diploma. Thus far, however, all she had was poor digestion, headaches, sleep deprivation, and occasional interviews for the NewsFeed as her accomplishment became more improbable.

Jennifer left the score screen and opened a new frame to continue with a new module. She had done three Grammar Modules in a row and wished for a change, so she opened a Chemistry Module. It made no difference to her. She never understood students who had favorite subjects, who would put off Math or Writing as long as possible. She never understood procrastination. She simply worked until she was exhausted, every day, with no heed to the subject area. It was all the same to her.

To unlock the next series of edugames, she needed to watch the Chemistry vidlesson. At the opening screen, she was given a choice of several hundred different teachers to choose from. Each teacher had his or her own style. Some were brusque and businesslike, while others joked and kept the lesson light. Some had an air of wisdom and experience, while others were young and attractive. Some explained topics deliberately, but Jennifer returned to the same half-dozen teachers who explained briskly. Unlike many students, Jennifer always watched the vidlesson before the edugame. It was true “Learning Was Fun” but it was also true that “Hard Work Pays Off.” It’s so easy, she thought. They give you all of the answers right in the lesson.

Too easy. But the thought was fleeting, and she brushed it away.

Jennifer selected Mr. 85. She was not sure why the teachers did not have real names, but she did not dwell on it long. Mr. 85 was a favorite of hers because he spoke a little faster than other teachers. The content of what he said was the same—it had to be; the teachers were scripted—but he lingered a few seconds less on the examples and generally made his points and moved on. She wondered how many minutes of her educational life had been saved by Mr. 85’s expediency.

Her stomach rumbled. I should eat, she thought, but instead she touched the icon for the Chemistry video and sat on the edge of her bed. The video opened. It was six minutes. Damn. A long one.

The introduction music came up, a familiar, infectious jingle followed by a voiceover. “Chemistry—All You Need to Know. A lesson by the EduForce Corporation.” Then the camera fixed on Mr. 85. Mr. 85 was a middle-aged black man with graying hair. He never smiled. Jennifer kind of liked that. He stood in front of a display showing an elaborate chart with boxes. Each box had one or two letters inside.

“Good day, I am Mr. 85. Today we are going to learn all about Chemistry. As you remember from the Introduction to Chemistry lesson, Chemistry is the part of science that is chemicals. The chemicals have names and symbols. Today I will teach them to you.”

He stepped to the right and indicated the chart. Jennifer already knew she would have to rewatch this segment of the video. Maybe the whole thing. All those boxes and letters would be difficult to remember.

“This is called the Chemical Chart. It used to be called the ‘Periodic Table of the Elements,’ but let’s keep it simple. The Chemical Chart shows you a list of all the chemicals, called ‘elements,’ in the world. Little ones are on the top and big ones are on the bottom.

“Let’s look at some of them. The very top one is called ‘hydrogen.’ Its symbol is H. The next one is Helium. Its symbol is He.”

Mr. 85 pointed out about a dozen of the most common elements and their symbols. Aluminum. Carbon. Oxygen. Phosphorous. Jennifer repeated to herself everything Mr. 85 said.

“Next, we are going to look at what the elements do together,” he went on. “But first, you may be getting tired. Do you find your energy dragging after all this learning? If so, why not order a box of Perk-Eez? It’s the little yellow pill that keeps you shining bright!”

The video of Mr. 85 paused and was replaced with a new screen offering Jennifer the opportunity to order a box of Perk-Eez. She touched the “Yes, please!” button on the screen, and a message immediately appeared. “Thank you! Your delivery will arrive at your unit shortly. Your household account will be debited.” Perk-Eez were another reason Jennifer was on track to graduate two years early.

Mr. 85 returned.

“Now that you know some of the chemicals’ names, let’s look at what chemicals do. They like to be together. Sometimes the same kinds of chemicals get together. One oxygen and another oxygen will get together, and they make up the oxygen we breathe. If you have taken the Human Biology module, you know we breathe oxygen.”

The Chemical Chart was replaced with a graphic of two blue blobs with the letter “O” on them smooshing together.

“Sometimes different chemicals get together. A carbon and two oxygens get together and make up something called carbon dioxide. Yes, that’s right, carbon dioxide, the bad thing your grandparents put into the air that almost killed Earth!”

A new graphic with two blue blobs and a red blob with a “C” all clinging together replaced the old one.

“All kinds of chemicals get together. Let’s look at some combinations.”

The screen showed a series of different colored balls, all with different letters, making different combinations. Jennifer shook her head, trying to maintain focus. It was a lot of new information.

As the video neared completion, Mr. 85 folded his hands and stepped to the center of the screen again. Jennifer thought she almost detected a smile.

“I hope you have enjoyed this lesson on Chemistry. Please rewatch this video as many times as you like before going onto the edugames. My name is Mr. 85 and it has been a pleasure teaching you today. This has been an EduForce vidlesson. EduForce, making learning easy and fun since 2034.”

The video closed. Jennifer watched it again three times. After the second time, the doorbell rang. She accepted the delivery from SentiAid, the pharmacy delivery service. She tore open a foil packet and gobbled a couple of Perk-Eez. Almost instantly, even faster than after a cup of coffee, her brain and body were buzzy and alive.

All right, she thought. Let’s play some more edugames.

The Chemistry edugame was called “Elementastic!!!” She read the instruction screen, then the game began. After a countdown, two words appeared on the screen:

Iron Argon

Jennifer typed in FEAR. The letters Fe and Ar zoomed in from the left and right of the screen, collided in a burst of color, and formed the word “fear,” which dissolved into sparkles that floated up to the top of the screen.

Carbon Oxygen Oxygen Phosphorous

Easy, Jennifer thought. She typed COOP.

More collisions and explosions.

Tin Iodine Phosphorous

SNIP

Helium Aluminum Sulfur

HEALS

Jennifer fell into a rhythm, working faster and faster on each round. Her breathing became shallow. Her pulse quickened and her pupils dilated as the words came faster, exploded bigger and more colorfully, until finally a computerized voice—male this time—announced, “Activity Complete. Chemistry Achievement Unlocked!” and Jennifer lowered her hands, panting.

The voice continued, “To celebrate your achievement, how about downloading the new song from Tuliphead? The infectious single ‘Plex Lovin’’ is already breaking new—”

“Sure,” Jennifer said, and the advertisement stopped. Buying was the easiest way to make the ads go away.

Even as a small child, edugames had come easily to her. She watched the vidlessons, played the edugames, and thought little of it. She learned with carefree abandon. But when she reached the age of twelve or thirteen, she became aware she was doing something unusual. Of course, she did not have classmates to compare herself to, and she had few friends to ask, but she understood she was different. Other children made mistakes, even had to redo modules they had not mastered. She had wondered what mistakes were, to have the certainty of rightness yanked out from under you.

As she grew older, she became acutely aware of her achievement. At age fifteen, she received a request for a vid interview with a reporter. She had sheepishly declined, unsure of what to say and certain her mother would not have allowed it. But over the subsequent years, several more interview requests came to her, and she began to accept them. Each time she said the same things, that she was proud and studied a lot to do the best she could. That answer was only half true. She was proud of her grade but never had to study. She watched a vidlesson, played the edugame, then moved on to the next.

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Born in upstate New York, Adam now lives in northern New Jersey with his wife, son, a neurotic dog and two cats. He teaches middle school English and writes science fiction, fantasy, and history, often in strange combinations. His stories and essays have been published in several anthologies and online magazines. Beyond writing and teaching, his interests include running and making improvements on his creaky old house.

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